All Comments on 'Reunion'

Deffinatly - Definitely

Alot - A lot

Ment - Meant

Breath - Breathe

i - I is always capitalized, no matter where it is in the sentence.

ill - I'll, although it was correct the next time you used it at the beginning of a sentence.

Some other usages bothered me, but knowing that different regions have their own rules, I put it off to that. (Like how you used T.V., I have never seen it written like that, TV or tv are the common usages where I live.)

A black wolf in shorts ... Surely a black man in shorts ... the shewolf knocked on the door in wolf form then had a cigarette in wolf form? When in human form please refer to hands not paws, and how they look in human form. When in wolf form don't have them doing things which don't make sense ... Good luck with your next chapter.

Totally confusing. Leah never did tell Devious why she needed him. They haven't been in contact with each other for 10 years but jumps into his bed without any explanations.

So many unanswered questions.