All Comments on 'Reunion Pt. 03'

It was a great story. Just curious as to why the abrupt ending?

Pt. 3 was always going to be just about Dean and Camilla mostly , and that I felt the story ran it's course.

camilla, a virgin no mention of birth control, 7 months later ?? Suzie ?? Wide open for more and don't rule out the rest of the family. MORE MORE

I'll think about it.

I want to read what happens between Camilla & Dean as it appears they are now a couple. Is Anna still fertile? Maybe there will be some babies in the family soon.

More of Dean and his sister.

What happened to dear old dad.

I put him in the closet and forgot to feed him.

Cash we have more of Dean and family

Just received reading your stories again and would love some more about Dean and family.

Good story as usual, I would enjoy reading more about Dean and his family

What happens next, baby's,money, bigger house, moving up in the firm and so on.

Would love to hear more about dean and his family maybe even step mom and step sister pregnant at the same time with Dean's babies, and julie sucking and fucking him as well serving both Anan and Camilla after he fucks them .

I just finished reading this again and it is still on of your best. It has that tragedy that makes you connect with Dean and then of course the seduction by Anna and Camilla that was so very hot. I can't believe that I forgot to comment on this story when I originally read it.

I stopped reading it as soon as you still had Mark in the picture. Mark should have been kicked out to go live with his father. If Anna had put up a fight about it, then she could have left also.

A lot of words used improperly

You REALLY need the services of a good, English speaking editor. So many words left out, misspelled, and mixed up grammer. Sentences chopped in half, and others run together. You have a very good sense of story line, and character developement, and how to build the tension. Add to that good grammer, sentence structure, and spelling, and you would be a top writer on this venue.

it was a great story, but the fucking with suzie destroyed it completely.

would have been great to get another chapter with Dean becoming a father and maybe focusing on just him and Camilla building a relationship. But still a great story man

Not up to standard of "Pharaoh's Curse",

This story was more of a "Wham, Bam, Thank you Mam"

Couldn't find any redeeming features in any of the characters.

But then I suppose people who are not particularly likeable still have sex.

Sorry Soul, read in the wrong date order.

Still just didn't like any of the characters in Reunion (not necessarily your writing, just my mind set), but it definitely shows a great improvement in Pharaoh's Curse.

You are now certainly one of my favourite authors.

Teenage fantasy stuff, but a lot of fun. Thanks

5/5

room for more chapters.

Wicked sense of humor. Plus a great storyteller. Keep going. Thanks.

Absolutely fab, just love your descriptions of cunnilingus, you are better than most at this. The way I like to perform when eating cunt and getting drunk on cunt nectar. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

“The way he held her. She wondered why that couldn't be her. Why couldn't he hold her like that?“ cause your a slut fucking 3/4 other people infront of his eyes? Cause you dont ask for a date but a fuck? You and your girlfriend fuck Mark infront of his face while he was relaxing? Cause you lived with him for 12 years yet never talked about your/his feelings?

“ Camilla made it known she was Dean's and Dean's woman alone. No one was ever going to lure her away from him.” Except for her father playing with her pussy in the living room, or when she sucks him off? Or when Mark fucks her ass?

"Mmmhmm." Camilla nodded biting her lip from the sharp pain of the tearing of her hymen.” It was mentioned her hymen was already torn by a bike accident.

All told ,a very good story. Loved it. AAAAA+++++

as weezyf said: It was mentioned her hymen was already torn by a bike accident.

Other than that an excellent story. 5 stars each chapter.

Hold up. This mofo is only making $20/hr and not selling code for millions?

I’d like to see more of this story

Twice in this tale, that statement is made that Camilla no longer has a hymen. So.... did it regrow before Dean took her virginity? Just curious. 4 stars DMW aka

Liked the story. Should re edit for the inconsistencies and wrong words in places. Law firm should have bought his software to have legal license to use it when he should have marketed it and made millions. The hacker should have been found. Anna's wealth was mentioned once and never used making it yet another non issue to the plot. He didn't marry Camille? The 7 months later read like a quick and rushed way to end it like you just got tired of writing the story, and it had me thinking he'd gotten Camille pregnant but she wasn't, so why the 7 months? Lots of holes that are just left behind.

I thoroughly enjoying the series. IMHO, not your best work or the most moving, but definitely worth reading.

I liked it. Although it seemed a bit odd to me that you mentioned the MC hated his dad plus new family because they seemed to replace his mom. But he comes around pretty quick. And he quickly has sex with them. I also liked how you let his boss move away as it saves on the drama.

I love your writing. Everything I have read by you is awesome!

Still waiting on more Pharaoh's curse........

I was kinda hoping to hear mentioning of pregnancies by at least both mom and his sister and maybe his boss too

One of your best!