All Comments on 'Reunion With Mother'

There is something lacking in this story. I think it is the mothers emotional inner struggle,that prevents this being a really erotic tale.The sons attitude is almost that of a control freak,that does not help matters.Having said that please consider a sequel.

Yess I whole heartedly agree with the other person. It does lack......something? The son is quite a control freak and that's a turn off. Falling in love with his mother is great, her in self denial, a little bit is ok, son being a control freak, nope doesn't work.

Things probably will be alright,the mothers guilt is so believable as is her lust.The sons attitude sometimes touches on the sadistic,then his guilt takes over and he expresses his love for his mother.Look forward to more about these two.

The mom is understandably going through some internal struggles over her sexuality in general, and her incestuous relationship with her son in particular. As the author describes it, the time frame (50's to early 60's,right?), his mom always being conservative, dressing conservatively, being sure to fit the mold of a proper married woman, etc. --- so it only makes sense that as he is pushing her to let the walls down and move beyond the safe realm she's accustomed to, she will experience guilt, fear, shame. This is because she wants to behave in a way that society says is wrong. Probably without her son pushing her to do so, she would simply continue to fit the mold society had for women in that time period.<br><br>

The son says he recognizes a submissive in his mom. Is he right? I don't know. But when he had her walk around the casino, she came back flushed with excitement. She enjoyed it. So -- was he wrong to insist she do that, when she ultimately enjoyed it very much? <br><br>

I think the mom wants a physical relationship with her son as much as he wants it -- but she's afraid of going against society's norms. That's why she says they can't continue. <br><br>

On a final note, if this story does turn into a BDSM sort of story, that's when I'll stop reading, because that's just not really my thing. Consensual or not, I wouldn't be interested in reading about the son tying up the mom and whipping her, or calling her a slut or a whore or a lot of the other stuff that seems to be part of the BDSM scene.

You have it in one ,you cant stop once you have had satisfying intercourse with your mother.Mothers that go this far dont want you to stop.

Well written. Interesting descriptions. Everything within possibility. I have a liking for stories that include views up the skirt of mature women. I'll check for more submissions by this author.

Was this a throwaway draft of the second part? You really should give a moment's thought to how you name the parts of your stories so that the reading order appears more naturally.

In any case, this tale has fizzed out. It's like you stitched together a few ideas from other stories in this genre and figured you could do it as well. Starts out as a juvenile man spying on his mommy then she cheats and kind of "outs" the whole exhibitionist/voyeur thing they had going. Jump ahead to a returning serviceman on leave fixing up a romantic date with the mom-love of his life. Warp it into the sadly familiar (pseudo-homosexual) humiliation by rectal penetration and control by public display on command. Slut-mommy is reassured that it's really love (???) so don't worry, be happy. After all he actually digs all the mature imperfections of her lush womanly figure.

I actually could have gotten behind that concept, but, even there you manage to admire her body using a kind of back-handed series of compliments which work out more as a further degradation of beloved mommy and her pasty-white fat slack ass etc.

Pick a corner and stick with it. You might write a worthy story at that point. Unless you're really two or more persons co-authoring these tales - then spare the rest of us. Please.

Your stories are well written. They also stimulate readers' imagination.

The first story in this seties shook me off balance. You described me as a young man, but i was not as lucky as your main character. But then, he lives in your creative imagination whereas i live in the real world. Sucks to be me (LOL).

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like to see more like ch 2

I think your mom needs to unbutton all of her buttons on the blouse except one bottom one and then put on a real short skirt and no underwear. Then you need to take her for a stroll around the city and show her off and make certain she shows off her tits and her nipples that's what I think you should do