All Comments on 'Revenge'

Maybe a second chapter where they both get revenge on the brother?

This really needs a conclusion with what they do to Alessandro... there deserves to be a reckoning.

4/5 due to incompleteness

dumb and/or gullible, she'd leave him based on that? He's better off without her in that case.

Needs a follow-up where they take down Alessandro!!!!

Can you please do a second part where they take revenge on the brother

Thank you all for reading and commenting on my story. I have written a second part where Alessandro gets his payback

I have mixed emotions about the follow-up story being all about revenge. Not sure we really need more of that in this world. But I have nothing against Karma, lol.

that next story.

I'm coming

So a witch in sheep's clothing. Secure the company or better yet, sell it out from under her and move out of the country. Of course you could go all Mafia on her ass and simply bury her body out in the back forty.

I really love the style, the "sound" of the language you use. Feels real. But the plot has a pretty gaping hole, two people both believing in the others cheating,feelingbetrayed, beingfurious, and no blow-up in the three years in between? Nope, not that

I like it. You had swishing and swashing back and forth with the storyline GREAT JOB 👍

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