All Comments on 'Revenge is so Sweet Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
excellent

moremoremore please

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hot Story

Bring on part 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Getting a bit confused by the story line

The plot's pretty good, but I feel there's something lacking in character clarification in this chapter. I kept getting confused as to who's whom during the dialouge. I'll reread it and see if that helps.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great!

Truly funny!

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