All Comments on 'Revenge is Sweet'

It was a good story until the end. Never saw that coming or where it came from. To say the least I'm a little confused.

cold and sweet. Revenge stories are good but one always has to remember, what goes around comes around, so watch your back.

But I got it. Maybe you rushed the ending a bit. Sometimes we get a little too excited when we stick it to the man (no pun intended - really!)! Great concept and good story!

I really loved the surprise ending, but I thought it needed more build up, more explaination. A little taste of Louise's reaction may have helped. Anyway, great story idea. Keep writing.

Write the story you idiot, that's what its all about.

For the read.