All Comments on 'Revenge on My Ex Ch. 06'

Sorry but after raping her, beating her senseless, torturing her and then fucking her life up, he deserves prison.

You let him get off scot free. What happens next time he’s angry? Does he knock her teeth out? Shove through a wall? Rape his daughter?

He’s a piece of shit rapist and he should be sharing a cell with Josh Duggar and Jeffry Epstein.

@Whackdoodle, that's like, your opinion man

This is a difficult story to rate. I am all for nonconsensual in a fiction setting. He is an excellent writer, so it often feels more real than not. Leaving the nipple clamps on that long is simply not safe. Unique ending.

next partttt

I know that this story is a fantasy and there were some interesting sections but the brutality was harsh. The ex would be dead by the end of the first chapter. To match with the ending, it would have been good to see moments of tenderness from the bf like true aftercare or thoughts earlier on where he would be questioning himself. His doubts at the end doesn’t resonate with his behaviour earlier in the plot. He suddenly became someone who could control his rage.

Anon, thanks for the feedback. You've given some good points. I disagree about the ex being dead from the events of the first chapter, but I completely agree with you about the bf's character development. Had I known from the beginning how I wanted to end this, I definitely would have put in some more inner monologue with some hesitation and regret on his part. Hope you still enjoyed. Cheers!

pls i want a next part so bad

when do we get a next part , i keep coming back again n again

Anon, it is coming soon. I've been on a little break for the holidays. Glad you enjoy the stories so much!

cant wait omg thanks!!

I couldn’t read it all the way through it was too brutal wen all she had done was leave him from what I can gather I’m all for punishment should fit the crime but he went way overboard it wasn’t Dom/sub it was abuser and abused dynamic an I do believe Stockholm syndrome is at play IMO

I’ve read bits of this chapter including the intro. This is similar to a Rape Fantasy but still doesn’t fit the bill. A genuine Rape Fantasy is one that is completely CNC acknowledged by both parties (or all if more). This is a fantasy story about rape, sure she may have wanted some of it and consented (internally) to some degree but from his POV it was full on rape and abuse.

He was expecting to go to jail for it, even before the explanations when she stayed in her submissive role he thought of her as a brain dead fuck toy. How could anyone live with themselves after being responsible for that outcome of destroying another person so completely? He also has a very low opinion of his friends because he thought they were all ok with the rape and abuse. He’s very literally the worst option possible to be a Dom, boyfriend or husband. In short he’s a shitty human being. How is she even capable of believing he won’t go too far, he already did go too far.

Tess (uk)

Tess (uk),

Thank you for the feedback. I respectfully disagree with you about the definition of rape fantasy. From what I can tell, you are talking about CNC. This story does not fall into that category, because, as you stated, she did not consent, and he really was a rapist. These stories are not for everyone, but they do have people who seek them out for a reason: it is a fantasy that can be safely explored through fiction. I write stories that I myself would want to read. Further, there are dozens of subreddits devoted to rape fantasy, and the majority of the participants are women. So, I will continue to write what makes me happy and what my fans enjoy. I'm sorry you did not enjoy this one, but I am curious, did you read all 6 chapters? Obviously, something drew you in...Have a nice day :)

1 star

i nevet hated any writer as much i hate you

fuck logic

he almost kill the baby left her alone to deal with it cheated om her which he think aint a big deal made sure he doesnt want to commit

and she is the sole person to pay with the abuse

what worst is the end

always the stupid chick in the end up with the bad abusive guy again

instead of committing a suicide out of guilt he is relieved thst she didnt reported him

has he even earned some trust and respect to be call himself anything to her let alone a master or a husband ?he thinkd he is fit for a husband?

the bastard aint even sorry ?had i done i would have turned myself to cops out of guilt and shame i dont even have the right to ask her for forgiveness

he said he will nevet hurt her but thats all he does ?

she may enjoy domination but this is overboard

you know nothing abt nipple clamps overnight nipple clamps would cut off the blood supply her nipple would have gangreen and they would needed to be cut off!

and he put the nipple clamps on her more than 24 hours

putting big dildos in pussy she ll certainly lose the grip and then he ll wonder why is she so lose?

ever heard of anal lube? or ever gave or recieved anal ?

you are a fkkn noob at the toys let alone bdsm

sorry for my harsh comments

but the way you made her a proud hero inspite of the miscarriage ,cheating ,no commitment,rape,gangrape ,permanently damaging anal insertions and repetive enemas and nipple tortures and her still forgiving him and worse be with him

letting the guy win in the end despite him being deserving of a lifetime w/o parole

you fkkn establish the fact thst you are fkkn man or fake female

pls have some decency or honesty and change your fake female gender to original male or incel which you actually are

dear writer

please stop pretending that you are women the way u answer in comments section u are a man in and out

only a male writer can be thst insentitive about a miscarriage and cheating on women and abuse such as rape

thats why i am not surprised at the height of sadism,torture ,zero aftercare and even it comes it seems like the readers forced you to write it

48 hours nipple play really

zero remorse

got away with his crime like any pedo would coz the child cant differentiate btw gud touch and bad touch

no remorse for losing his baby and hurting her

and still dares to have self entitlement to be her husband or dom?

i feel like puking my guts out

and then you blame the readers that they dont fkkn understamd the diff btw noncon and abuse ?

i usually dont agree with TESS U.K but you ....you made her seem more reasonable so this time i highly agree with her

dont you think he get away too essily and too light heartened again zero remorse

btw i read till here to see him repent him to somehow make him sorry for what he did to her a big time which isnt in you story in case you are wondering why people torture their brains too read stories this painful

but you made the girl super dumb and w/o backbone even though she has done nothing wrong

Anon, I have definitely received a lot of criticism for these stories (as well as a lot of praise, public and private) but never one with such vitriol. I can't imagine sticking with a story through 6 chapters if it made me physically ill simply to see some justice done to the villain. These stories can be triggering, hence the warnings at the beginning. As for your disbelief that I'm a female (I can only assume you went to my profile. Most people assume I'm male because I chose to write these from a man's perspective), I can only say that you are free to believe whatever you like. These stories are complete works of fiction. In fact the first chapter I wrote was based on my own ex, who is absolutely nothing like the main character in this story and would never hurt me physically in a million years. I thought, what would it look like if he just completely snapped one day? And 'Revenge on my ex's was born. It was originally written for my own pleasure only, but after seeing a lot of interest on subreddits, I published it to great reviews, especially female readers like myself. Erotic fiction is a way for some people to push the limits of their own kinks in a safe environment, knowing that it is completely fictional. Based on the level of hatred you feel, causing you to comment on every chapter, maybe more is going on. Seek help my friend.

The comments and your replies make this even more interesting. I find extreme abuse of females difficult, but can enjoy if the male dom is doing it to give the sub pleasure, and not solely to get sadistic pleasure himself. There were parts of this which went over my line, but then it’s my line, and others would certainly disagree. Overall I kept reading, and was glad I did. I found the ending a little weak, but understand how hard it is to bring a powerful saga such as this to a good conclusion, and a ‘happy ending’ is always right in my book. Thanks for writing and for your reasoned replies to unnecessarily unpleasant and poorly reasoned comments. Your exchange with Tess was an excellent example of two ladies with a good knowledge of writing using comments to help overall improvement. Thanks

Headitor, thank you for your thoughtful comment. I am always trying to improve, and I would love to hear suggestions for a stronger ending. Glad you (mostly) enjoyed it! :)

I love your writing! I'm a female and would never imagine any of this actually happening to anyone, but find it incredibly hot to read and picture myself in. The people who are angry over it clearly can't separate an unrealistic story with action. I would never want to go through any of this, but that's the difference between realism and fantasy. Keep up the great writing, I can't wait to read more!!

Anon,

Thank you for your kind comment! I agree with you, but I do try to understand others' perspectives and offer warnings accordingly (that are obviously ignored). Still, I'm glad you enjoyed the series. I will be working on a separate series soon that I'm sure you will enjoy. :)

I loved the story but I think that end was not satsfiying because how can someone that was acting like a madman the whole time turn submissive and I think you should have made it a little more dark and I know I am saying that because of my love for dark BDSM stuff but the paragraph weaken the character, but what can I do about it is the choose of writer.

Magnificent!

I also think you're a man. Only a man would be so ignorant of women's anatomy. Cutting off the blood flow to nipples for days would destroy her nipples. Amputated nipples aren't erotic. And shocking someone repeatedly is bad for the heart.

I made it through the series by skipping the constant beatings in hopes of seeing something positive. Instead, I'm disappointed. Safe word? Sure but he doesn't agree to honor the point (safety) of a safe word? He gets a complete pass from her, and he suddenly becomes submissive. This one's just not my cup of tea.

To each their own, my friend.

Well by the miscarriage it.changed the whole premise of the story after going through something so horrible alone for him then to beat the crap out of her it can only be trauma bond an she needs help to get away from the abusive arsehole an stay away he is right he deserves to be locked up