All Comments on '"Revenge" on our Cheating Partners'

paybacks

Very good revenge story, short and sweet.

Thanks for sharing.

Outline for a LW story.

Not much there.

Only a brief outline.

Lacked tension.

3, not bad, just pretty average. A really good idea in there but unfortunately not very well explored, this was very much a flash story. Way too short to be a proper story. I'd love to see an expanded version exploring the relationship before the break-up, the smut in the middle (which was enjoyable in this story if short) and the aftermath.

Great so far! How about the next chapter, tells us what happened the two cheaters , maybe??

Good story!

4

Hopefully there's more??? Curious how they confront their exes.

G

This was interesting. It was easy to follow the narrative and visualize the events. The only issue I didn't feel anything regarding any of the characters.