All Comments on 'Reversal of Fortune Ch. 03'

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ImSickImSickabout 3 years ago

Not particularly crazy about the ending but I do like your writings please keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The prostitution was too often and too much.

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I love your story, you are a great writer, I love your stories, please could you write a story with a mother with operated tits and her son studying in a school where there are many blacks who want to fuck with her, please write it, thank you very much

SalazarSlySalazarSlyabout 3 years ago

Your a great writer but the ending was out of place.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story, a little long, but a hot read.

Keep up the good work. Maybe a white

mom cuckolding her white teenage son

with numerous BBC's could be an idea

worth thinking about.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Hot story! I like how everyone adapted to the situation, especially Erica who went from novice to pro, and her dad who finally discovered his true self!

chasvtchasvtabout 3 years ago

Very fun enjoyable story. Only suggestion would be at end to extend it and have Stan watch his wife's and daughter's bellies swell before he leaves.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

if the story of a mom with fake tits fucking with the black boys from her son's school

MrWilburMrWilburalmost 3 years ago

Thanks for the story. I just love a BBC Happy Ending!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very good and interesting. Surprise ending. I’ve read Sam and this and will read the rest of your stories

Thanks .. robin

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

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12bolt12boltover 2 years ago

Like Disney,s happy endings

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

hello, how are you? have you seen natasha henstridge the unhealer dressed as a waitress by god she is a milf goddess please please I ask you have a story about her or with the same characteristics of her that woman in that movie dressed as a waitress makes anyone hard but I want to tell a story about a milf mom and her weak son who is harassed by the blacks at his school please please I ask you thank you very much if you can see the movie or the photos of her in the movie thank you very much

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sex work is as good a career as any other, if the girl enjoys her job. A white girl getting to fuck black men regularly AND getting paid to do it, is much like winning a lottery too. My wife read these three stories with me and absolutely agrees. We loved the story, it's hot and kinky twists and all it's uninhibited raw primal sexuality between all those involved. It's beautiful, on multiple levels. Perhaps you’ve painted one version of modern life for white families today, l sharing in their love and devotion towards black men and their superior sexual dominance. We've talked about it at length now, but aside from the poor loss of fortune aspects of it which we wouldn't wish to actually experience, and, we both would be open to exploring all the sexual aspects your characters did, within our own family and community today. Thank you, for planting those seeds, and for inspiring us to step out of our vanilla life, and look at embracing a new exciting direction together!

PenPal2001PenPal2001over 2 years agoAuthor

@Anonymous "Sex work..." Wow! I'm glad you enjoyed my stories. Good luck with your new exciting direction. Give us a progress report some time!

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyabout 2 years ago

Was struggling with the whore thing but the ending salvaged the series. The plot twists kept it off balance. Been awhile but good job

8796Porno8796Pornoalmost 2 years ago
Thank you!

I liked the whole story very much!

IntoblackIntoblackover 1 year ago

I loved the story and especially the tattoos and the ending were delightful! Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved every word, a beautiful ending. Keep writing

dary4247dary4247about 1 year ago

I liked the story. Of course I want to read more raunchy sex. Still, good story.

Hornydevil47Hornydevil47about 1 year ago

I know it is completely ridiculous that conveniently the lottery was won at precisely the right time, but I loved the story. Thank you so much for your effort. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

PenPal2001PenPal2001about 1 year agoAuthor

@Hornydevil47, Thanks so much for your kind remarks, Mel. She was a lucky lady, I guess!

JackiemichelleJackiemichelle5 months ago

Couldn't stop reading. I love their journey. I hope you will finish their journey and take us where you want them to go. Love your stories

DaidonoDaidonoabout 1 month ago

This was a great series. Would love to these characters or similar and these themes again.

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