All Comments on 'Revival Ch. 02'

story was going great untill it took a rapid and unwanted turn towards BDSM. other then that was pretty good.

This was so good I wish there was more to read. Please continue the story. I'm loving it so far!

What happened to mates complimenting each other? BDSM????? Seriously??

The extent of lashing was indeed disturbing. Could really use a warning at the start of first chapter. Bondage and D/S is much easier to take in (and I do acknowledge that mates complimented each others in this). Not that I am fan of the use of weed either.

So therefore only 4, not 5 stars.