by fireandlace0533
Amazing story. So glad you decided to continue it. Can't wait for chapter three.
Great story, can't wait to see how it develops when the Wife and the Marine Father come home
A very long time ago, an older woman whom I fell for and couldn’t have said, “Love is never wrong. The worst that can be said of it is that it’s inconvenient.” That’s where these two are, and I can hardly wait for the following chapter(s) to see how they figure it out. A few inconsequential editing errors, but still a 5 star story. When’s the next one coming?
I am impressed with the characters and story line.... waiting rather impatiently for the next chapter!
Excellent
Improbable, and it looks difficult to be anything but doomed, yet no less excellent
Very interested to read where you take this
Five for you
This needs closure - please write the finish. It’s hot that he found some hot pussy to bang. But he too is a cheater. Two wrongs doesn’t make a right. He needs to cool his heels till he confronts his ex. Get her cheating ass kicked to the curb then show off his new girl. Chris Rock song “she’s half your age & twice has hot”
Well, now you’ve done it! You turned a perfectly great one off story into what looks like an amazing series. Can’t wait for more.
We have to have more!!!! Don’t leave us hanging. Seriously love your writing and content
This is certainly an excellent story, a sweet fantasy playing out with hot eroticism that is showing a love developing. Great balance and pacing. Hell- I sound like a critic (Which I'm not!)- sorry! I LOVE this and will check back for more chapters!
There has to be a follow up storywith this two. College life for her and his wife coming home early catching her in the bed. lol
I do love this story and would like it to happen to me. I will want to read the next one. thanks for a fantastic read. you sure know how to make an old man's pants tight.