All Comments on 'Rewarded Pt. 02'

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ShelbyDawn57ShelbyDawn5711 months ago

Amazing story. So glad you decided to continue it. Can't wait for chapter three.

albertaboyalbertaboy11 months ago

Great story, can't wait to see how it develops when the Wife and the Marine Father come home

EricaDoesNowEricaDoesNow11 months ago

Definitely worthy of continuing. Thank you for that!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

A very long time ago, an older woman whom I fell for and couldn’t have said, “Love is never wrong. The worst that can be said of it is that it’s inconvenient.” That’s where these two are, and I can hardly wait for the following chapter(s) to see how they figure it out. A few inconsequential editing errors, but still a 5 star story. When’s the next one coming?

Ying69Ying6911 months ago

I am impressed with the characters and story line.... waiting rather impatiently for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Excellent

Improbable, and it looks difficult to be anything but doomed, yet no less excellent

Very interested to read where you take this

Five for you

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I am loving it! Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This needs closure - please write the finish. It’s hot that he found some hot pussy to bang. But he too is a cheater. Two wrongs doesn’t make a right. He needs to cool his heels till he confronts his ex. Get her cheating ass kicked to the curb then show off his new girl. Chris Rock song “she’s half your age & twice has hot”

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit2460111 months ago

Well, now you’ve done it! You turned a perfectly great one off story into what looks like an amazing series. Can’t wait for more.

TechumsahTechumsah11 months ago

Wow well written great characters. Can't wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

We have to have more!!!! Don’t leave us hanging. Seriously love your writing and content

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This is certainly an excellent story, a sweet fantasy playing out with hot eroticism that is showing a love developing. Great balance and pacing. Hell- I sound like a critic (Which I'm not!)- sorry! I LOVE this and will check back for more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

There has to be a follow up storywith this two. College life for her and his wife coming home early catching her in the bed. lol

chad132chad13210 months ago

I do love this story and would like it to happen to me. I will want to read the next one. thanks for a fantastic read. you sure know how to make an old man's pants tight.

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