All Comments on 'Rewarded Pt. 03'

Ooof. This is a good story but I hate that that's the ending, even if just for now. You bring up all these things they have to work through and then don't offer any resolution to any of them. 9.5/10 for the first two chapters and two pages here, 2/10 for the flat ending if we don't see these characters again.

What I do know though is you have made falling in love for the first time, magical, thank you." She kissed me lightly on the lips.

"We will figure it out together, I promise, it isn't a fling for me either. What I know is, you have made falling in love for the last time, perfect for me, thank you."

Absolutely beautiful. Right to the precipice, all the possibilities and challenges, a whole new life in front of them. You left me with a sense of hope and a smile on my face.

Thanks you for a beautiful story.

So glad you fell in love with the characters, as we have.

Well written. Cheers 🥂

I was really looking forward to fireworks with Hanna and dad, and Shawn's daughter.

Enjoyed the story....right up to the cliff-hanger. There is sooo much to be resolved that it feels incomplete to me. I know you said this was the final chapter, but it really would help my "mental well-being" if there was one more that brought full closure... Just saying :-)

A great story!...... I think we do need a follow up at some (not too distant) point please...

Solid 5 star……Glad he booted his wife. But we really need another chapter to finish this up. Does dad except daughter dating a 50 yr old man. What about his daughter & her say in her mom being a cheater. Does the divorce go smoothly. But out of all this does Harold get kicked to the curb as well!!!!! We need to know. Thanks for the read!!

I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED this story! I know it was a good place to end, but I will miss these characters. As a 50 year old man this was perfect.

I loved your tale, I felt that this had the potential to be much more, I would have loved to know how hanna's dad dealt with this, how Sean's divorce went, and the age difference over the longr term, but a very good story.

Fantastic story and characters. Hopefully sometime in the future you pick this back up.

Great story. I'm sad to see it end with so many loose ends. I do understand that addressing the "Elephants in the room" is more Literature than Literotica. If we do see more to the story, we are the benefactors. Thanks for a passionate weekend.

So maybe have Hannah's Dad end up with Sean's ex wife and Sean snd his Ex's daughter end up with Hannah's brother. Most Jerry Springer Thanksgiving dinner ever.

Thanks for the awesome story and I know you said this was supposed to be the end but there are so many loose ends that it could have been a bit longer to tie them up.

Love the story but there are so many ways it could continue so left feeling incomplete. Thank you for grabbing my interest and hope you will consider continuing it.

Great chapter again! I hope you will come back to it and also write more Mature category stories. You are good at it.

An excellent story. You write so well and are extremely creative with your character descriptions. Though not my normal genre, I was intrigued. You caught me and kept me coming back to the end. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Great but I think you need to clean up all the loose ends.

That was great, and I really liked your two main characters.

It would be a shame to end this story there, as there are still so many things that need to be resolved.

The divorce, his daughters reaction, Hanna's dad, getting some revenge on the wife's boss... at the very least, Sean should contact Harold's wife and blow up his marriage.

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My only criticism was that the confrontation with the cheating wife was a huge anti-climax. She cheated on him for years... most betrayed husbands would be furious, especially her screwing the boss in the family home.

Also, getting the wife to tell the daughter why they're getting divorced is a huge mistake. Cheaters are compulsive liars, and she'll spin it to make him the bad guy.

I would have contacted the daughter asap and tell her exactly what the slut wife was up to.

Waiting hopefully for the next chapter!

Grest triple decker. You have to come bavk and give us more. They deserve a hsppy ending.

The story needs to continue. Great characters and so much left unresolved.

Wow! Great story!