All Comments on 'Rhymis and Hannah Ch. 01'

by kate_oriley2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very exotic and lovely. Please continue

zarathustra7zarathustra7over 16 years ago
Yes, more.

Wonderful. Please continue.

michchick98michchick98over 16 years ago
Good start.

Seemed a bit rushed, but a good start nonetheless. Perhaps an explanation of where/when they are would help. Please continue, I'd like to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
pleasantly surprised

I was pleasantly surprised with this tale. Usually most of them need editing, this one didn't. reading about the mutual orgasms both my gf and me

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