by Sweetmab108
Like vignette format; fun with opportunity for different erotic encounters. In the trip to beach (#2) our protagonist has not had sex in 10 years (since break up) — seriously!? In the two encounters that include sex, your descriptions are a bit bland, lack sensualness — don’t need to be in love to enjoy sensual experience. Your “favorite” writer is JCMcNeilly (good choice; great writer) — you might study her love making/sex scenes.
Great set of stories. My favorite was the first one. It's too bad you didn't expand these stories a little more, but it still worked out great.
5stars.