All Comments on 'Rides for Hire'

by Sweetmab108

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MigbirdMigbirdover 2 years ago

Like vignette format; fun with opportunity for different erotic encounters. In the trip to beach (#2) our protagonist has not had sex in 10 years (since break up) — seriously!? In the two encounters that include sex, your descriptions are a bit bland, lack sensualness — don’t need to be in love to enjoy sensual experience. Your “favorite” writer is JCMcNeilly (good choice; great writer) — you might study her love making/sex scenes.

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

Great set of stories. My favorite was the first one. It's too bad you didn't expand these stories a little more, but it still worked out great.

5stars.

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