by Lycandope
Checkmarked "Like It" for the quality of the writing, imaginative creativity of the concept, and the skilled plot development.
But I didn't really "like it" as I began reading it with a differently developed story in mind--a different expectation. Lack of consensual agreement to rape with no chance or hope of a "future" one would normally hope to have...disturbs and offends.
Sorry. My bad.
An interesting story and could set up for follow ups of their life after the change