by Sam_Knight
Wow !! What a great story. You painted such an amazing picture with your words. I would love to hear more and hope that you continue the journey of these 4 people.
What a fantastic story, so erotic, as an older man, i can feel empathy with both couples, I'd have loved this when I was younger, and I'd love it now. Only i wouldn't have wanted it to ever end.
Unique story set up, good writing, hot sex, no abusive partners. What’s not to like. Very well done.