by geronimo_appleby
By far one of the best-written works I've read in a long while. Just enough backstory to keep it from being pointless, and what there was was interesting enough to make me want to know the details in the next chapter. Not just a senseless fuck-fest like far too much of the stuff on the mind-control lists. Good work, and I look forward to the next chapter. There were a few minor typos, but nothing severe enough to hurt the overall work.
NOTE: I've been a literotica reader for years, this is the first story I've actually felt motivated enough to comment on.