by Knottyboyqs
I gave it 4 stars. More sex, more detail on that sex would be good. Nice start though. Don't worry about the anon haters. What can you say about someone that reads in "loving wives" and then hates sexual experiences written about married women? Those people are mentally damaged.
There are about 10 pathetic bitter old men who always attack writers of hot wife stories like they did you. Read the story by Imstillfun called You Only Think You're in Control, where a guy named Jim who is just like them gets what he so richly deserves. I think about that story and laugh whenever these pathetic wimps one bomb a good sexy story. I give yours 5 stars, Keeping showing them how useless they are to try to stop you from giving us more good stories. Delete their comments. It pisses them off and we can laugh at them some more.
to the threesome. It sounds as if Wifey had her own idea of what a threesome is or was a little selfish in her supposed shared experience. .
Nice effort. Perhaps next time you may consider elaborating on their fucking and your reactions to make the ending more explosive.
Fantastic story,very similar to my own life.Please post more.Regards John.