by bakersboy
As if you couldn't see that coming a mile off.
Insanely predictable,,, sorry
Yes, please keep this series going..... there are so many possibilities!!
The whole incest angle is pretty unnecessary for the story. At least you could have made Tia as a step-daughter and it would have been less creepy, but you didn't, 2-stars.
More please!!!! Great story thus far..... can't wait to hear what's next