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All Comments on 'Rise of a Pirate Queen'

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grob39zgrob39zabout 14 years ago
Badly in Need of Editing

Story has possibilities but is distracting to read with spelling and grammer issues. At least use spell check if you can't find an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like the story so far

LimnophileLimnophileover 1 year ago

Nice idea, but could use proofreading or an editor. Please continue!

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