Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Rise of a Pirate Queen'

by Kitling

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 3 Comments
LimnophileLimnophileover 1 year ago

Nice idea, but could use proofreading or an editor. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like the story so far

grob39zgrob39zabout 14 years ago
Badly in Need of Editing

Story has possibilities but is distracting to read with spelling and grammer issues. At least use spell check if you can't find an editor.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login