All Comments on 'Rise of the Cuckoldi'

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chipmonk9chipmonk9over 1 year ago

Been a while since someone done an ''original'' Goblin type story

deliciousevildeliciousevilover 1 year ago

Really well done! Thank you for sharing this!

deliciousevildeliciousevilover 1 year ago

This is a great story. (Start of a longer story perchance?) Thank you for writing and sharing this!

HantsHermesHantsHermesover 1 year ago

Really enjoyed this story. If you decided to write another chapter to this story I will definitely be reading it

JAFCritic3JAFCritic3about 1 year ago

I think you should continue the story. The character development of Drax (the destroyer of women?) has a good foundation. You could definitely add to his character. All the nuns could be fleshed out like with Mary and the mother superior. On top of that, you could introduce other races, an antagonist or 3, and possibly even another survivor like Drax. Only this other survivor would be more of a hindrance than enemy and Drax would have to either find dominance or defeat the other one

TheCandyManCan13TheCandyManCan134 months ago

Great story. Love the idea and concept and the initial base sounds fun. Impregnation fetish is fun as well!

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