All Comments on 'Ritual Breaking of Suburban Wives 07 - UnSanitized'

I hope you will continue with this series....this version is so much better than the sanitized one..the humiliation and domination of the matriarch using the slave as a toilet was so damn hot to read!

I've probably read over a hundred stories containing coprophagia and I usually just skate over it or drop the series. This is the second time I've found it hot instead of a turn off. Impressive.

Re: Anonymous' and Polgart18's comments.

Thank you. That is possibly the most dubious achievement I've ever received a compliment for. I am very, very relieved that I was able to make it come across as hot, instead of...you know.

I appreciate the rest of the comments Anonymous left on the other chapters as well. Glad you liked the story, and I'll keep the contructive critiques in mind for future stories.

Weirdly enough, I like this. I think what makes it work is that the experience was described from an observer's perspective, which partially filters out the sensory aspect of the encounter and focuses on the power dynamic aspect. If this was written from Anass's perspective and the audience was treated to a detailed description of the taste, smell, and texture of feces, I think my reaction would have been a little different.