All Comments on 'River Rock'

I liked it well enough but …. where’s the rest of it? You set the scene well enough but now these characters need to do something interesting

Well the “slowish” tag was the most honest tag I’ve seen yet on Lit… 🤪. That said, I’m a sucker for good character development. Maybe though a bit longer installments because I suspect this might be a long ride, but so far it looks like it might be worth it.

Fairly typical "First day of School/Stepsister" start, Stepmom as principal creates some interesting possibilities - I'll stick around to see where this goes. 3K to 5K words makes a better Lit Post - just sayin'.

More will be coming! Not listing this is part one, rookie mistake!

Good but ended way too abruptly, kind of like my sex life.

Goo intro and ending made me want more. Please keep them coming. In the future more would be appreciated if time allows it