by HandcuffGirl
Ah the joys of mind control and a perfect town to use it to the fullest. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
Your stories are always my favorites, with the girl's slow descent and all the little humiliations that are heaped upon them. Wonderful to see you writing again; you are the best!
Very well written, very sexy.
Perhaps the sex could have been a bit more graphic and detailed - that's really the only improvement I can see.
Very sexy tale... those other idiots are prudish assholes.
Story was a bit long though...
Write more cop stripper stories please.