by crazielife
www.literotica.com/s/road-trip-141
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That means there are 141 stories just on this site with the same idiotic title. That is a good indication of how little effort went into writing the story.
Oh, mercy. Another woman with a perfect body who's had kids and is mistaken "wife" a famous actress. Fiction without conflict or drama is empty. Yeah, this is a fantasy piece, but readers have read "that story" countless times--show us something different. Even one of the standard LW tales well done is preferable to a fantasy vignette as divorced from reality as this. You write well, so now, tell us a story. 2/5.
I liked it, but please learn the difference between Champaign and Chanpagne. Champaign is a city in Illinois. Champagne is the drink.