All Comments on 'Road Trip'

OMG, this was one of the most beautiful coming of age stories I've ever read. Four guys that you'd love to have for friends and the most perfect father in the world, how does it get any better than that. This fantastic feel-good story easily gets *****s plus along with my sincerest thanks for writing it.

Very hot! And, simply a beautiful story of love! XOXOXO

That's such a sweet story. Hot, but more than that, romantic. I feel so happy for them, and I want to know more of their lives. But I'm just happy they found their true connection and are off on a great life! Thank you!

I love this story. Thank you for this.

Once again I have to completely agree with MarcLuciFer. Now can we hear about Quinn and Jay?

Excellent writing and narrative arc. Would be more powerful still if you signaled how far back this was in the past. Like, an hour ago? Or a year back? At places you go into the past tense where most of the story you're in that ambiguous English tense that oould be present/could be past. A few clues/pointers would strengthen the story. you're an excellent writer. I've read here for several years; this is one of the best 10 stories here

One of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. Thank you!

Cute, round bellybutton on page one! Love it. Always a pleasure to see you share a new story.

I’d like more chapters with these four. A whole week in FL and I’d like to hear about each encounter. Sean and Seb’s first fuck, did they flip? Jay and Quinn’s perspective. How long had they known about Sean and Seb? How long had they been a couple? What happened in their room all week? I loved the sweetness of this love story and know I’d like some more telling of the hot sex. The handjob in the van, the first blowjob, and the hot frotting was so great. There has to be so much more!

Gonna cry, this is so beautiful

Whoa. Excellent writing. Hot as fuck story. Great dialog and narrative flow. Character driven. Flashbacks loaded with adumbration. Keep sharing your work. WG

Fabulous. Pity my dad wasn't like Sean's. Just an egotistical self centred arsehole.