All Comments on 'Rob and Stacey Come for Dinner'

The difficulty was getting through this piece. The 'screenplay' style has no room for description of characters, for plot development, for anything. How tall is Sarah? Or John? What color is Stacey's hair? The point is that there is no detail, none, except for the obligatory genital descriptions. A real yawwwwwn.

This has to be the worst story I have read on here...and that is saying something. There was absolutely nothing to draw me into these characters. I agree with the other reviewer...you need details. Even the sex was as dry as the Oklahoma Dustbowl.

I would have ranked this much better except for lack of character / personality developement and the very difficult style of presentation. Keep writing

Rewrite it as a story as the premise is good, I just don't read scripts