All Comments on 'Robin and Connie Pt. 01'

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tndriver53tndriver53over 4 years ago
Good start

Nice intro I'm curious to see where it goes from here

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Carole

What's

Happened to Carole

Robingreen678Robingreen678over 4 years agoAuthor
Carole vs Connie

Name change mess up. All to hide all real identities Sorry

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Confused but promising

Presumably Carole is Connie, but what is the early reference to Francis all about?

Otherwise, a very promising story

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
***

Thanks for the read.

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Hello, “Words themselves prod and confuse and may not have truth in them, but in stories truth can always be found.” ― Ellen Malphrus, Untying the Moon A great story starts with a real experience, adds fantasy and imagination and a smidgen of the absurd. I am a mature, Ha...

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