All Comments on 'Robin's Journey Ch. 01'

The first line of a story, posted on an erotic website, "There is no sex here, this is merely setting the stage for future chapters". Sure made me want to read it.

You are a fairly good writer but have a misguided understanding of erotic writing.

Anon obviously has simple tastes. I much prefer a slow build to a quicki. Looking forward to more great chapters!