by SaucySam
Don’t you dare stop there . This really does have the makings of a scrumptious tale and I’ve Luved all that you have written for us to indulge in but , more for pity sake give us more . XXX
Lovely oldie tale. Had a few odd phrases where I stumbled, but otherwise I really enjoyed the style you've used for this story. Our Roger seems to be a go-with-the-flow fellow, and I am excited to find out where this new older lady is going to lead him.
You have written a story that ends where another stories is just a waiting to begin. In reading it, I felt as it I was spying on the Steerage section of the Titanic during its voyage to America.
And why wouldn’t there be a Cockney dick girl cumming to America back in 1910? It was very much like C. Dickens meets the Marquis de Sade with a protagonist who has some of Oscar Wilde’s more salacious proclivities - brilliant! And what about the fem boys wearing lady’s nickers in the room he’s been led to? Well I’m waiting!