All Comments on 'Roleplay gone wrong Ch. 01'

A great read, loved every moment of it, congratulations.

Wow! That was hot! Please continue.

Very well written bridgetrose. I am not a very huge fan of rape - but the way you have written this story it s incredicble. Looking forward to reading next chapters.

Yum, loved it, what a twist.

Darn impressive

Loving the immersive alternating POV's between Allison and Charlie

Also looking forward to part book 2 part 2

Continue on

Cheers

Wow. The swapping back and forth the POV really worked well. With Charlie doing what he thought his wife wanted, and Allison slowly losing her controls. 5*

Well done!

It made me cum during my lunch break. 5 stars

You really knocked that concept out of the part with this one. It's nice reading all your glorious comments on this one too. You sure tell great stories. So far you're the only author I'm following.

You said 'End of Book One'. Please Book Two, soon. Several ways this can continue. Everybody is surprised and decide to never talk about it again. Dad and daughter find they both loved the sex and plan to continue with or without mom knowing. Mom is surprised about the mistake but also excited about new possible role playing with her daughter and husband.

yes daddy, drunken dad raped his daughter thinking she was his wife play acting, raping her all the way continue your story bridget, wife daughter threesome daddy loving them both.

One of the best invest stories ever read. Generally gone off them as they are usually a bit hard to believe and cliche. But this was absolutely fantastic writing and very sexy. Looking forward to part 2

Fuckkin' Delicious, As Always!!!

Amazingly hot, really looking forward to part two!!

Holy shit that was hot. Gonna need that next chapter STAT! So many possible directions you could take this. Daughter confessing and begging him to keep "raping" her, wife finding out and wanting him to "rape" both of them, daughter finding ways to keep "tricking" him into fucking her instead of his wife. The possibilities are endless.

Lovely way to write ... Dual POV..

Write mine plz

One of the hottest read...

Both POV.... Wow

Would love to get my story written by you. (Dad's POV)

When upis next part ready?