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Click here"You're probably right," Laura replied, trying hard but only partially suppressing a smile. "I'm sure she has a lot of qualities that I've never noticed before."
Marisa said something else, but Laura really didn't hear it, her attention having shifted to the thought of some of those qualities. Many of which had been demonstrated, not only on Friday night up on the overlook, but on both Saturday morning and afternoon. In fact, there had been a fourth demonstration that had ended only an hour ago, one that had left Laura's bedroom in the disheveled state it was in.
"Yes, given the chance, I think Janet and I might even become friends," Laura concluded with a knowing smile.
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- COMMENTS
Hppyfun1over 3 years agoYour a fantastic writer and communicator. . Your slow build up and attention to detail, especially clothing is a huge turn on for me.... MMMMM... I like the road getting there, just as much as being there. !!! You paint a great picture in my mind. Attention to detail is awesome.... Keep writing, your awesome :)
Ravey19over 3 years agoLovely sweet story with a fantastic outcome.
I graduated in 1973 also and clearly remember the first portable phones resembling bricks. We also christened the first portable pc, now reduce to a laptop, as luggables; you had to have real muscles to carry one of those around!!
Anonymousover 3 years agoLove your writing, and the story always makes the sex interesting and exciting; in other words, actually erotic.
Thanks!
amritaloverover 3 years agoGreat Story. I really enjoyed all of the setting details that reminded me of the era. I had an expensive brick phone. My friend had a Pinto. We still dialed phones. We left messages on answering machines before texts. Another wonderful contribution. Thank you.
Anonymousover 3 years agoAnn does an awesome job with descriptive detail that makes you envision the passion more clearly. I love your writing style, sentences flow logically and the detail you provide is believable. Thank you
Ann Douglasover 3 years agoAuthorI just wanted to take a moment to thank all those who were kind enough to leave a comment about the story - both on here and directly via email. They were all greatly appreciated.
rkadharover 3 years agoLove your stories, and liked this one too. Just to nitpick, I thought it would have been even better if it was not a straight forward story. A bit of conflict, and little more of should-we / could-we makes it spicier.
thanks for writing!
