All Comments on 'Roman's Sex Slave Ch. 01'

Four - or Fore...?? Or, even For...>

Four Miles around? Why was the limit at Four Miles?

For Miles around? Ah! Now it makes sense...

Hight of Stupidity or Height of stupidity..?? How Low can you get?

"the high point of Digitis's day..."

"Why it was barred to her..." No, it was the Bard getting in there..!

As I said, a simple story ruined by bad grammar...

the Romans didn't have printing....

Too many spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.

You maybe ought to consider proofreading and/or having your story proofread before posting. You should also consider completing a chapter or story before posting.

But please (Please!) proofread before submitting. So many careless mistakes detract considerably.

Please don't just rely on spell-check, it has given you words that are out of context and spoiled your story. Get an editor to make it readable

...after the first couple of paragraphs. Dreadful writing and even worse spelling.

Too many typos and errors to enjoy.

Good so far. I feel bad for the people in the comments getting butthurt over proofreading stories posted on a porn site. Seriously?