All Comments on 'Romantic Buildup Straight to Gay'

Does Dave ever call the speaker by name? I'd like to see them reconnect and stay together. Dave seems like a human sex machine -- get looker, great body, cock that won't quit. etc. How about the speaker? Any body hair? I like a man with a bit of chest hair, hair for his treasure trail, hair around his cock, and a bit of hair on the shins and thighs is nice too. I'd like these two to resolve their differences.

Quite hot!

It was going great until the end. Didn't like that. Rather abrupt breakup. Maybe you will reconsider and add a new chapter. cp

Your 'Dave' was my Gary.

The sun rose and set on Gary, and I sometimes felt as though I loved him overwhelmingly; then, just as in your story...it ended.

Your story reflects life as it IS; please don't give in to the Happy Ending drumbeat.