All Comments on 'Room 413 - Ch. 01'

Good premise.

But Freya's sex was too rushed.

Needed more steps and more dialog from her about what her sex partner was doing to her, how she liked it, what she'd like him to do next. and shat she'd like to do to him.

Three stars.

Thank you. This was a wonderful first effort or not. you have a gift for detail and pacing and context. I can’t wait for the next installment

Awesome. Very realistic. I wouldn't change a thing. It reminds me of when I once heard someone through a wall under similar circumstances...except they were trying to be quiet as to not get caught. I learned that sometimes listening is more arousing than seeing or experiencing.