All Comments on 'Room Service'

Really well written, and enjoyably erotic. very descriptive. Keep them cumming

The Erotic Couplings story. Sorry NOT a Romance

. . .with Anon of 09/12/18. It really belongs in Erotic Couplings. This has the air of a one-time encounter, which they are both enjoying of course, not of any real emotional engagement leading to an ongoing relationship.

Nonetheless, I enjoyed it, quite a lot.

But you really need to learn to proofread, or else find someone to do it for you.

OTOH, all five of your stories were submitted in about a one-month period last year, so you may not be planning to write any more. (And you may not even be logging in to read comments. Oh, well.) I hope you'll find more to write.

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