by Stories3882
3 comments, the oldest only 11 days ago... There has to be a 3rd and at least a 4th chapter. It has only been maybe 4 days of their 2 week shared room together.
So good!! I would have had to be twenty eight to last like that. Can't wait till they actually fuck each other.
Bloody friggin hell! This is the sexiest, most erotic, most deliciously paced story I've ever read! I can hardly wait for more installments. I can't believe you don't have more followers. Your ability to paint not just the pictures of a story but the emotions and physical sensations as well are unparalleled! I can hardly wait to read more from you! I wish I could think of something more than thank you, but I can't, lol so I guess that's all you get....until next time. Thank you!
Beautiful description. Could have carried forward to actual sex. However, NO ANAL please.
You managed to outdo yourself with chapter 2. I hope you’re able to find time to finish this wonderful tale.
I hope you get back to add to this tale. Just finished all 6 of your stories - Excellent! Thank you
excellent. I'd love an ending what happens the next day: the next week?? This can't end with our lovers just going home!
In a word:
G R E A T !!
Kate and Paul clearly had a wonderful reservation mix-up.
I hope there is there is a third chapter.
Cordial August regards!
Definitely need more!! It made me so horny picturing in my mind what they were doing and how it would feel! I actually had to get myself off after reading the last of it!! 😍
Thanks! Lovely, sweet, easy hot sex. Not quite a suspension of disbelief without some background story and character development but I liked their respect for and careful attention to each other’s needs. You stayed right in the hot zone without losing me in boring repetition. Good stuff. You left us all hanging here at the end of season one.
Thoroughly enjoyed this and the first part. Couldn’t put the book down. I hope you will continue to develop their story further.
You have to post the next chapter . . . I am so worked up, I need release soon!