All Comments on 'Roommate Surprise - Abby and Kate Ch. 03'

This simply does not flow well and is quite awkward to say the least. no real relational established that isn't solid and they might as well just showed up and decided to have sex with no serious established relationship. might as well just walked in off the street and then just look at each other weirdly thinking well i might just have sex and let me be tied up as i have nothing else going on, no real build up and no long term anything going on. very inept.

Did Mr Anonymous below read this series from the start? I think it’s great

Yeah, þhe anonymous commentethe didn't read the same story. Also, can barely frame a coherent thought, and possibly has never learned how capital letters work.

Never understood why so many writers make each page a chapter. Story lacks emotion, no real development with the characters. If all readers are after is a stroke story then you did well. Three stars.

"To be continued"???

As for the Comment from 'SHEEP_Dog', did you read your Comment BEFORE Posting it??