All Comments on 'Roommates Ch. 10'

Your best one yet. Whew! Thank you.

Hope we get a sequel because so many great chapters

Oh

I think you have the potential to write even better stories by continuing on to explain the sex better and more times. I know a lot of your stories are based around the exhibitionist angle, which is great, but I think that longer sex scenes with more orgasms for each partner would be great.

Fun but a little to far fetched for my taste. This story would have been much better if there were more feelings involved. More remorse, more empathy.