by MaxStone
First she wasn’t wearing panties and then he qas rubbing on top of them?? Then she stayed in their place (roomie? Must share the same house) and she slept in the couch??? Why wouldn’t she sleep with her boyfriend?? The story is not really well planned, nor edited
Who's fiance? Panties on,off? Stopped reading by paragraph 3. Get an editor
A MALE engaged to be ,arried is a FIANCÉ
A FEMALE engaged to be married is a FIANCÉE
Please consider correcting this error (and any other obvious errors) and then reposting your revised story
I read three paragraphs and then posted this note.
Thank you,
Semi-literate garbage. You rubbed her panties you just said she wasn't wearing? Grow up.