All Comments on 'Roommate's Friend's Fiancé'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story please write the next part soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

First she wasn’t wearing panties and then he qas rubbing on top of them?? Then she stayed in their place (roomie? Must share the same house) and she slept in the couch??? Why wouldn’t she sleep with her boyfriend?? The story is not really well planned, nor edited

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Who's fiance? Panties on,off? Stopped reading by paragraph 3. Get an editor

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A MALE engaged to be ,arried is a FIANCÉ

A FEMALE engaged to be married is a FIANCÉE

Please consider correcting this error (and any other obvious errors) and then reposting your revised story

I read three paragraphs and then posted this note.

Thank you,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Semi-literate garbage. You rubbed her panties you just said she wasn't wearing? Grow up.

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