All Comments on 'Roommates With Benefits'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well written first chapter. Nice dynamic between the kinky little ginger, James and the brawny Damien. It looks like this is going to be a very interesting and hot story. Looking forward to chapter #2. MLF

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This doesn’t start well, imo. Damien seems like a total dick and a irrational bully. Nothing sexy about that. And the illogical submission inferred for James is off-putting. We will see where this goes…

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This COULD turn into an interesting relationship between James and Damien. Does Damien maybe have a sexy hairy body since he is called "Blackbear"? Looking forward to more reading!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Not a story. Check out the author’s information listed about himself. It also is not worth reading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good start to what could be a pretty good story if followed.

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