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BEERQUACKBEERQUACKover 3 years ago
sucked

hope theres no more to come!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Yikes!

I was liking the story until the sudden shift at the end. You went from a 5 to a 2 with that.

fullchoketubesfullchoketubesover 3 years ago
Dark Turn

This is really well-written. Good descriptive language and the recollections enhance the current events in a good flow. The dark turn at the end was very abrupt and left me wondering, "what the hell?"

LukeLutonLukeLutonover 3 years agoAuthor
Feedback more than welcomed

A few readers expressed surprise at the ending of Rose Mary Strikes Back.

I had not considered that to be an issue. I thank those of you that took the time to comment.

I shall take that into consideration for future stories.

It would also be nice to hear from those that liked it the way it is (is there anyone?) - Thanks, Luke

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As Luke Luton, I write stories that could be described as erotic, bawdy, smut, good or bad or barely tolerable and (likely) many other ways, depending on your sensibilities and critical flair. As a writer, criticism, painful as it may be, is often a useful tool.  Do I have to...