All Comments on 'Rose Pt. 05'

So enjoying this cant wait till the next pt!!!!

That's my only complaint. Slavers, buyers, traffickers... killem'all, let God sort'em out.

Wipe out the whole place, put it to the torch and leave nothing but scorched earth and ground bodies. Leave all the id's and make the super laptop send a secure email to five different news outlets on the way back to town...

Good violent action for the truly BAD guys!!!

Great story. Keep it going. AAAA++++

So... he's sneaking around, slits a guy's throat, drags him behind a building, makes about the most noise a person possibly can when he decides to redundantly shoot him, and then starts sneaking again, worrying about squeaky hinges and stair steps?? No way a real operator would have used a gun on that first guy. Also, risking a brownout by turning on heavy equipment in the slaughterhouse would not happen, even if the facility had been verified sound-dampening enough to handle his wasteful shots and the machinery. All of his encounters were one-on-one; use of a gun would have been a fail, up to potentially covering their retreat.