by Iwroteathing
Spiffingly good. Wonderful characters, Wonderful story, thanks so much for writing and posting
I loved it. A great story. At first I did not know where you were going with this, but you brought it all together in lovely nasty dirty way. Thank you for your work.
Dude... Your mother... Your. Mother. Your mother!
See? I don't understand this guy. He has a super slut girlfriend and instead of using it for both his own benefit and hers, he shares her with others. And well..., his mother.
Another great story. This one, I'm humble opinion, with the right amount of risky slutiness, meaning not being outright stupid. Of course in fantasy the character's self-preservation doesn't matter much. But I still like it, you know. Thank you, Iwroteathing. Please don't make us, you readers, wait so much. ;)
-Onkana
So, okay, I have to admit I had a knee-jerk reaction when Lorraine came on to Janine, and nearly closed up the story right there. But I decided to tough it out, and I’m glad I did. You took it in an unexpected and fun direction, and it was a fun (and hot!) ride. Good times!