All Comments on 'Rough and Tumble'

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ScottishTexanScottishTexan3 months ago

750 Word Project contest entry. Nice job! 5/5

OvercriticalOvercritical3 months ago

What???? I certainly missed something. But it's not worth worrying about. 2*

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

"his cat had taken it upon themself..." Somewhere, a teacher is crying real tears over this tragedy.

lAnatomistelAnatomiste3 months ago

Precise, well honed!

inka2222inka22223 months ago

If I dunked Tolkied half a star for all the poetry in Middle Earth, I'm sure I will be forgiven for dunking 4 stars for this... well, I'm not quite certain WHAT it was but I'd like to know where I can get whatever... this writing... is.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

You never know!

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onehitwandaonehitwanda3 months ago

> his cat had taken it upon themself to lay a fart directly into his nose in revenge for a late breakfast.

Yes. Cats are indeed this malevolent.

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