All Comments on 'Roxanne'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Not much character development, not much story. Could have been so much better with a little more forethought and imagination. There are already thousands of "Hi, you're lovely, yes and you're handsome, let's fuck" stories. I couldn't give it more than a 3, but at least you tried.

funcpl124funcpl124almost 3 years ago

Please continue. I liked it alot!

alcova53alcova53almost 3 years ago

I would love to read a continuation of this story too

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It has its ups and downs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story, let’s see where it goes!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

We’ll written!!!

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