by PhDwriting
Was so interested and well thought out. Can't wait for the next couple of chapters
Completely disregarding the plot and actual story - I simply could not get over that damned name: "HinTata". The janky, jarring monstrosity of a name evokes all the negative references it possibly could - from a failed attempt to engender sympathies with fans of a certain anime franchise, to a miserably lame pun about breasts.
Hintata is a commissioner's OC, I did not pick her name (admittedly, I'm not a huge fan either)