All Comments on 'Roxanne's Foreign Exchange'

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UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 6 years ago
Nice little romp

Perhaps one day fantasy will knock on my door.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
To be continued...:::

Any chance of some sequels, that was really good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Amazing!

This is so good! Please do a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awaiting

Was so interested and well thought out. Can't wait for the next couple of chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Diff

Boy, was that different!

J C P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Completely disregarding the plot and actual story - I simply could not get over that damned name: "HinTata". The janky, jarring monstrosity of a name evokes all the negative references it possibly could - from a failed attempt to engender sympathies with fans of a certain anime franchise, to a miserably lame pun about breasts.

PhDwritingPhDwritingalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Her name

Hintata is a commissioner's OC, I did not pick her name (admittedly, I'm not a huge fan either)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So Good! Sehr Gut

Very good. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

That was something, something Amazing!

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