All Comments on 'Roxy's House of XXX'

Can't wait for part 2

wow what a storry, thanks for that it lasted me an entire week xD

Unreadable.

Second person POV writing is just terrible. Tenses are mixed, too.

This could be a good story if it was edited to address this, but I couldn't finish the first page.

Descriptions were pretty good considering the problems, but it wasn't worth the pain to get far enough into it to find out if the story was good.