by cerrotorre
Ended too soon. What was Somalia like? I still don’t understand why she was alone when he met her. How did she meet the girls, Lisa and Patricia? Definitely want to know more. Thank you.
I can't believe I'm the first to comment on your fabulous story. Your story is as beautiful as Gabrielle's. Your writing style is in the same league. The undercurrent of Adrian placing himself beneath her in looks and sexuality made the story titter with excitement. Her interest was obvious to all of us readers, but not to Adrian, which added to our enjoyment. All character descriptions are fitting, and the lack of detailed sexual details added to the meaning of love found here. The conclusion is what most readers are expecting, along with the wish for another chapter.
A most definite YES!!! to each of your questions in the story's last paragraph. Thank for sharing your story with us.
I enjoy your writing and this story. But I can’t enjoy the non consent stories. So please add to this. Thank you